Blader Zeo

I guess i could do that ), well I still need a better mouse ) but i'll try with just my mousepad since i have been wasting money on triple AAA batteries on the shop nearby )

annnnd... it's eyes are more of boyish haha. why rose pink? i wanna know about herrr! harhar, guess have to wait where she pops out

ix3TotallyKei wrote:I guess i could do that ), well I still need a better mouse ) but i'll try with just my mousepad since i have been wasting money on triple AAA batteries on the shop nearby )

annnnd... it's eyes are more of boyish haha. why rose pink? i wanna know about herrr! harhar, guess have to wait where she pops out

She already popped up but not everything about her is revealed yet. Her past and identity will all be revealed in the 2nd arc where romance also comes in.

Here's her info:

Blader Zeo wrote:The lady looked at him with innocent-looking amber eyes. She was shrouded in a light brown robe and has her short and fallout wavy hair in a rosy color. "Are you alright?"

"Yes." upon holding Zeo's hand, the young lady blushed.

wahaha, i'll also try coloring that. if i hav the tym that is )

*i'll also read that ahaha, good that u put up some romance

m9clz wrote:wahaha, i'll also try coloring that. if i hav the tym that is )

*i'll also read that ahaha, good that u put up some romance

Thanks. The hair color is kind of the same as the hair color of the character in your sig and ava, only a bit lighter. And yeah, I'm going to add romance. Actually, I've already added some in chapter 2 but it's just teensy weensy hints.

Blader Zeo

Chapter 4: The Two Flame Bladers

"Oh.......so this is the rumored power of Demon Hunter Zeo, the Flame Blader." uttered Orion upon witnessing the sudden surge of power of the flame blader. He was neither shocked nor surprised but was rather amused. A mischievous smile was present on his face.

"My body feels light somehow." said Zeo, his voice calm and serious. But, he didn't even wait for another second after uttering those words to charge against the enemy. Swiftly, he unleashed the Black Blade, surging with orange flames it was. The passion of his flame, the same passion embedded in his orb-like eyes. Zeo striked Orion with the blazing blade but the latter used his own sword as a shield to protect himself from the attack. Zeo was able to drew him back. Rain who was looking at the shattered pieces of his blade shifted his vision from it to the battle.

"This is......" thought Rain in awe. His eyes widened. He saw their blades clash with one another from time to time. Although the difference in strength between Zeo and Orion is that great, Zeo didn't stop fighting. He continued wielding his blade even though it seemed like a hopeless situation. The clashing of their blades was interrupted when Zeo jumped up high, dodging Orion's blade. In the process of landing, Zeo striked the mysterious villain with the Black Blade again but he was unsuccessful in hitting him. Orion used his sword to defend himself again. Smiling, magma flames engulfed his right fist. He punched Zeo, specifically on the stomach, causing him to be blown away towards another flat-roofed building.

"Is that all, little brother?" asked Orion as he inserted his blade directly to the sandy grounds of the city. He shifted target to the rose-haired lady. The whole ground glowed in a magma crimson color. The sword glowed as well. "It seems I have to use force, princess. Flame Stream!" the rose-haired lady's eyes widened as Orion took his sword from the ground carelessly. The moment he took it, a huge stream of crimson slashes in the form of energy blasts. She was about to get hit by the blasts but then something blocked the surge of slashes. A fog of dust formed when that occured. When the dust cleared, Rain and Orion saw Zeo with his arms stretched in opposite sides protecting the lady.

"Why? Demon Hunter.....?" wondered the rose-haired lady. Due to the attack, Zeo's coat and shirt was ripped off. He was also severely wounded but he still managed to stand up. The flames on his blade eventually vanished, signifying his weak state. The lady's brown robe was blown away by the gushing wind caused by the impact of the slashes, revealing her appearance. Her rose hair was in a magnificent fallout style. She was wearing a magenta-colored blouse and a black mini skirt. Pollux on the other hand appeared behind the two of them through a yellow portal made by her teleportation ability.

"Here." offered Pollux, reaching for the lady's hand. The rose-haired lady looked at her with beautiful innocent eyes. "Take my hand. It's dangerous here." the lady nodded in agreement, pressing her hand against Pollux'. She glanced at Zeo before looking back at the young girl who assisted her. Not before long, both disappeared throguh the same yellow portal. They were transported to a well-hidden place just near the battle field. That very place where they are transported is the basement of a certain establishment in the city. On the flat roof of that establishment stood a man holding a scythe with a black handle a sharp silver blade.

"So that's the Flame Blader....." uttered the man. He has swept down hair with the leftmost and rightmost parts spiked in different directions. He was wearing a silver-colored robe with black-colored bandages forming shapes exactly like the letter X. He was also wearing black pants. His outfit altogether is akin to an assassin's outfit. Aside from noticing the flame blader, he also noticed Orion. "It seems that he arrived earlier than I did."

"The two Flame Bladers, Orion and Zeo." Rain thought as a piece of memory flashed through his mind. He remembered the first time he met Orion. He was ordered to search for the flame blader. After months of travelling, he finally met the candidate and was amazed to witness his power. He took out a hundred rogues in a certain village for only five minutes. What's more surprising is that he didn't even used ten percent of his total power to defeat them. However, Orion refused the position of a Blader, stealing the Flame Orb in the process. It was then rumored that he joined the most terrifying organization in the world, Pleiades.

Under that organization were different kinds of outlaws with enormous amounts of power. In joining that organization, the former flame blader candidate used the pseudonym Orion. Nobody knew about him, even the leader of the organization. Because of his dreadful power, he was able to rank up and eventually became the second in command of the organization. The piece of memory faded.

"Come at me, Zeo. Show me the power of your hatred." said Orion, tormenting his little brother. As said, Zeo charged towards him. The moment he reached Orion's area, the mysterious villain striked him with his sword. However, the figure that was hit by the sword vanished in black flames. Zeo appeared behind his brother. Orion tried to strike him again but the figure vanished in black flames for the second time. Causing more confusion, ten Zeo figures suddenly appeared from the black flames, surrounding Zeo's older brother.

"Black Blade: Moonlight Shadow!" cried the ten Zeo figures. No matter how much Zeo tried, he wasn't able to confuse Orion. Instead, the latter seemed amused by his younger brother's actions. He repeated what he did before, inserting his sword in the ground.

"Flame.....Stream!!" Orion cried as he lifted his sword. A huge stream of crimson slashes in the form of energy blasts appeared, taking out all the Zeo figures. Mysteriously, the figures left traces of black flames. Those flames headed towards Orion's direction and assualted him as if they were burning him alive. The mysterious villain seemed surprised himself. However, him being surprised was actually just an act. Zeo appeared above him, prepared to strike him the final slash that he could give. "Little brother......so there you are." Zeo's eyes widened upon seeing his older brother's body glow. The black flames were turned to nothing but ashes.

"How could this be? My black flames...." wondered Zeo, surprised.

"It's over. Flame Ray!" creid Orion. With that, he delivered the last slash to his younger brother. His sword glowed brightly, as bright as magma. More wounds appeared on Zeo because of the last delivered slash. That attack also caused him to be unconscious. Now, Rain is all by himself in the battle field. Orion was about to search for the rose-haired lady but the sudden surge of the reddish silver-colored gushing wind stopped him. It was no ordinary wind. Specifically, it is a mixture of fire and wind elements. It even dealt scratches to his face and arms. "So you're here."

"Yes, I am here, Orion." said the voice of an easygoing man. The man jumped from the flat roof of one of the establishments. He was the same man holding a scythe. "How long has it been?"

"Why are you here? Rael, the Reaper of Death." uttered Orion upon seeing the man.

When the flame dies out, the wind comes to ignite it. The Reaper of Death has arrived! Who is he and what is his goal?


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Chapter 5 Preview

Zeo: Everything seems to be alright after the Death Reaper helped us in the battle against my brother. He said that in order to unlock my potential, I should meet him at a place called Shade. In the end, we were able to save the lady being targeted by my brother. Resting at an oasis in the city, I contemplate about the things that's happening in my life.

Sherry: Demon Hunter Zeo, thanks for saving me.

Zeo: What is your name?

Sherry: My name is......Sherry. Next time on Blader Zeo, Sorrowful Memories!

Zeo: This place called Shade.....should I go there?

this one?

Cool, m9clz. And, make the hair color lighter too.

Nice Madel but it would be better if you'll erase the background, erase it next time:> Thanks:D


PS:"dont erase my name" hihi :lol!:Joke!

I updated the pic, is that ok?

3Arl` wrote:Nice Madel but it would be better if you'll erase the background, erase it next time:> Thanks:D


PS:"dont erase my name" hihi :lol!:Joke!

wahaha, yeah i know but, it's more harder if i do that ) it'll take more time )

sorry for double posting

m9clz wrote:I updated the pic, is that ok?

It's better but her hair color still looks crimson in color. The hair color is kind of similar to your avatar's hair color. Kind of....

Beejay1231 wrote:

m9clz wrote:I updated the pic, is that ok?

It's better but her hair color still looks crimson in color. The hair color is kind of similar to your avatar's hair color. Kind of....

ahaha, i dunno what's rosy pink in exact. ) if i make it more lighter, it's not match with the drawing

m9clz wrote:

Beejay1231 wrote:

m9clz wrote:I updated the pic, is that ok?

It's better but her hair color still looks crimson in color. The hair color is kind of similar to your avatar's hair color. Kind of....

ahaha, i dunno what's rosy pink in exact. ) if i make it more lighter, it's not match with the drawing

I see. Try using your ava's hair color and see if it fits or not.

Haha nice one madel )

ahaha, ok ok, i'll look my sig first )

so which is better...



or this one

Both colors fit the design. Great, m9clz! But, I think, the Superior Members' username color is the rosy pink.

wahhaa, i see. if u give a sample color that would be easier

ix3TotallyKei wrote:Haha nice one madel )

haha, tnx kc

m9clz wrote:wahhaa, i see. if u give a sample color that would be easier

Yeah. I should have done that.

I think u should separate your story from this thread so it will be more easier to read

m9clz wrote:I think u should separate your story from this thread so it will be more easier to read

No need. This is the Blader Zeo thread and the designs give more visualizing power to its readers. Plus, I'll just repost chapter 4 soon since lots of posts overshadowed it. But, if other readers find it hard to read. I'll make this a discussion thread for Zeo and another thread for the story.

I actuallly made oneee! )

here it is )


well its a trial ) Animated verison~ awhoo )

the pout thing was hard...(since i just used the mouse pad!) she kinda looks different.. but yeah bear with it >;D

wow, kc, i liked it

where did u made this? Photoshop?

m9clz wrote:wow, kc, i liked it

where did u made this? Photoshop?

Yah, Photoshop CS4, still studying the hair shadow and color effects

It's good but the innocent look of the character disappeared. Also, the hair color is the username color of the Superior members. And, the nose disappeared. Still, the work is good though. Don't be discouraged. XD